Wonders All Around

Learning Alongside My 5th Grade Wonders

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Setting as a Reflection of Character

from Teachers Write

PART ONE: Take a pad of paper and a pen or pencil. Go outside and look around. Write a paragraph describing your surroundings.

Sitting on my front porch.  Looking out at our quiet court.  The neighbor’s car backs out of the driveway and drives off down the road.  The air is humid, but a cool, strong breeze blows, rustling the leaves.  I look out at the flowers in front of my porch.  The purple teardrop flowers sway on the hostas.  The long leaves of the daylilies wiggle in the breeze.  The hummingbird feeder and from a low branch on the nearest tree; it too rocks back and forth.  The bags of yard waste, recycling  bins, and trash cans are lined up at the curb at the sides of each driveway.

PART TWO: Now, you are a lost six year-old child. Rewrite the same description from this point of view.

 

 

Now, you are a satisfied housecat. Rewrite the same description from this point of view.

 

 

Now, you are a fifteen year-old whose parents just announced they are

divorcing. Rewrite the same description from this point of view.

 

 

Reread the four descriptions. Look at how different the exact same setting can become

depending on the scrim of perspective through which you view it. When you return to

your own work, remember this. Setting can be a reflection of character.

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Rhyme

from Teachers Write…Here’s today’s assignment:

1. Commit to writing a 12-line rhyming poem or story.

2. Use either 6 couplets (aa/bb/cc/etc) or 3 quatrains (abab/cdcd/efef)

3. After you’ve written the first 2-4 lines, count the syllables. Even them out as necessary and then stick with that count as you finish the piece.

4. Read it over. Does it make sense? Did rhyme force you to do anything you didn’t want to do? Adjust as necessary.

5. Wrap it up. Read it aloud. Read it aloud again. You hear that? You did that!

 

 

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Strengthening Voice with Characters

from Teachers Write

Exercise 1: Visualization

Picture your character walking through a door that is far away. All you can see is the shape of their body because there is a bright light behind them. When they step through the door, describe what they are wearing. (Write all you can in 2 mins.)

As they move further into the room, describe the objects that you can see around them. (Write all you can in 2 mins.)

As they stand in the middle of the room, people begin walking toward them. Describe who these people are and what their relationship is to your character. (Write all you can in 4 mins.)

Exercise 2: Becoming Your Character

Put yourself in your character’s shoes and answer the following interview questions as if you are them. What do you love the most? What do you hate the most? Who are you jealous of? If you could do anything right now, what would it be? What is your biggest secret?

Exercise 3: Flip the Switch

Imagine that a bad guy with an opposite-ray dropped into your book from hyperspace. The opposite-ray hits your character full in the face and now they are the complete antithesis of the person they were before. Now answer the same questions above again. What do you love the most? What do you hate the most? Who are you jealous of? If you could do anything right now, what would it be? (I don’t include the secret question because presumably will be the same.)

Exercise 4: Conversion

Take any scene from your current WIP that includes the character you’ve been working on. Strip away all of the setting information, the emotional tag lines and write it as a play with only the characters’ words and any stage directions that move your character into a spot that helps your plot to continue, such as: Moves to door. Door swings open and hits them in the face. Now see how the words your character uses without any props conveys their emotions, or DOESN’T convey their emotions.

 

Exercise 1:

A small boy walks into the room.  His blond hair is short all around, spiked up a little in the front.  There are freckles across his nose, onto his cheeks.  He wears rectangular glasses, tinted with orange on the arms of the frame.  He wears a bright yellow neon shirt and dark blue athletic pants.  You can tell that he slid his feet into his shoes to save the time of untying and retying them.

His classroom is dark and empty, a little light coming in from the hallway and the outside windows on the opposite wall.  The desks are arranged in groups with the chairs stacked separately around the room.  Most desks have books sitting on top, some in small neat stacks, some in tall, lopsided towers.  The whiteboard has the date and morning work listed for the day.  Picture frames with photos of students and their families line the tops of the cabinets.

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Character Image Systems

From Teachers Write

Today’s assignment:

Pick one character, and one image connected with that character. Either as you rewrite an existing scene, or as you draft a new one, bring that image with you. Use it when you describe your character or when it’s time for a metaphor to reveal your character’s emotion, and hey—if all else fails, throw that object into the scene with them and see what happens.

 

Amelia rocked on the swing, twirling her ponytail, as she looked at the other kids playing soccer on the field.  She jumped off the swing and started walking toward them.  As she did, she stuck her hands into her pockets.  The left pocket just had some threads and lint, but the right pocket had something much better: Extreme Sour WarHeads. 3 of them!  They must have been left over from the weekend when her brother dared her to try them.

When her brother first mentioned WarHeads to her a month ago, she had no idea that he was talking about candy.  When she first watched him and his friends try them, rapidly blink their eyes, puckering their cheeks, flapping their hands, and trying to hold back tears, she knew these candies were not for her; she preferred smooth, sugary butterscotch drops.

But there was something funny about watching her brother and his friends eat the WarHeads.  EVen though they looked like they were in extreme distress at the time, they also looked like they were having fun.  And they keep doing it over and over again.  I made Amelia wonder.

It took a lot of pestering, but Amelia finally gave in to her brother and joined in on the WarHead Challenge.  The winner was the first person who could finish 5 WarHeads.  Amelia finished in last place, not even able to finish one WarHead.

As she rolled the WarHeads around in her hand, she though about the fun she had being part of a challenge with her brother’s friends.  They cheered her on and congratulated her for finishing her first WarHead.  They were shocked and high fived her when she popped a second one into her mouth without any prompting.

Amelia walked toward the soccer field, ready to try something new.

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